can you help me edit this paragraph please! check grammar too.?

Question by humtum1234: can you help me edit this paragraph please! check grammar too.?
Bankruptcy is a legal proceeding in which people who cannot pay their bills can get a fresh financial start. Federal Law provides the right to file for bankruptcy and all the bankruptcy cases are handled in federal court. Filing bankruptcy immediately stops all of your creditors from seeking to collect debts from you, at least until your debts are sorted out according to the law. There are many effects on you once you filed the bankruptcy. Such as, eliminating the legal obligations to pay all of your debts, it stops foreclosure on your house, prevent repossession of a car, and restore or prevent termination of utility service. There are different types of bankruptcy that one can file; Chapter 7 (Straight Bankruptcy), Chapter 11 (reorganization), Chapter 12 (reserved for family farmers) and Chapter 13 (Adjustment of Debts). The most common bankruptcy case is filed under chapter 7.

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Answer by Jeremy H
It is all ok.

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10 comments

  1. RFM says:

    I see no necessary changes.

  2. ~Erika~ says:

    Bankruptcy is a legal proceeding in which people who do not have any money left on them to pay off their bills get a fresh financial start. Federal Law provides the right to file for bankruptcy and all bankruptcy cases are handled in federal court. Filing bankruptcy immediately stops all of your creditors from seeking to collect debts from you, at least until your debts are sorted out according to the law. There are many effects once you have filed for bankruptcy, such as eliminating the legal obligations to pay all of your debts, stopping foreclosure on your house, preventing repossession of a car, and restoring or preventing termination of utility service. There are different types of bankruptcy that one can file; Chapter 7 (Straight Bankruptcy), Chapter 11 (reorganization), Chapter 12 (reserved for family farmers) and Chapter 13 (Adjustment of Debts). The most common bankruptcy case is filed under chapter 7.

  3. kathrynkae says:

    damn i think it is quite good and could use nothing more actually.
    it’s great.
    no grammar mistakes

  4. viestafiesta says:

    Bankruptcy is a legal proceeding, in which people who cannot pay their bills can get a fresh financial start. Federal Law provides the right to file for bankruptcy, all bankruptcy cases are handled in federal court. Filing bankruptcy immediately stops all of your creditors from seeking to collect debts from you, until your debts are sorted out according to the law. There are many effects once you file for bankruptcy. Such as; eliminating the legal obligations to pay all of your debts, stopping foreclosure on your house, preventing repossession of a car, and restoring or preventing termination of utility services. There are different types of bankruptcy that one can file; Chapter 7 (Straight Bankruptcy), Chapter 11 (reorganization), Chapter 12 (reserved for family farmers) and Chapter 13 (Adjustment of Debts). The most common bankruptcy case is filed under chapter 7.

  5. manii says:

    Bankruptcy is a legal proceeding, in which people who cannot pay their bills can get a fresh financial start. Federal Law provides the right to file for bankruptcy and all the bankruptcy cases are handled in federal court. Filling bankruptcy immediately stops all of your creditors from seeking to collect debts from you until your debts are sorted out according to the law. There are many effects on you once you filed the bankruptcy such as, eliminating the legal obligations to pay all of your debts, it stops foreclosure on your house, prevent repossession of a car, and restore or prevent termination of utility service. There are different types of bankruptcy that one can file as in Chapter 7 (Straight Bankruptcy), Chapter 11 (reorganization), Chapter 12 (reserved for family farmers) and Chapter 13 (Adjustment of Debts). The most common bankruptcy case is filed under chapter 7.
    you better write the name of book from which you have quoted chapters

  6. ChanceHaloAnthonyEmbrey-Farquhar says:

    Bankruptcy is a legal proceeding in which people who cannot pay their bills can get a fresh financial start. Federal Law provides the right to file for bankruptcy, and all the bankruptcy cases are handled in Federal court. Filing bankruptcy immediately stops all of your creditors from seeking to collect debts from you, or at least until your debts are sorted out according to the law. There are many effects on you once you filed the bankruptcy. Some of the effects of this: eliminating the legal obligations to pay all of your debts; it stops foreclosure on your house; prevent repossession of a car; and it restores or prevents termination of utility service. There are different types of bankruptcy that one can file: Chapter 7 (Straight Bankruptcy); Chapter 11 (reorganization); Chapter 12 (reserved for family farmers); and Chapter 13 (Adjustment of Debts). The most common bankruptcy case is filed under chapter 7.

    I see that other answers aren’t changing the , to ;
    Trust me, you’re supposed to because when you use a semi colon (:), then you have to separate the information with colons (;). You could put a comma (,), but only if you were talking about the same thing instead of changing ideas. As in, where you put the parantases when you were talking about the chapters, you could of put it like this – Chapter 7, Straight Bankruptcy; Chapter 11, reorganization… and such as

  7. Katherine Y says:

    Dude. Have you noticed that there is nothing wrong with it! wait…I see something. You said “Bankruptcy is a LEGAL proceeding” It is not legal to steal. Hope that helps.

  8. Carl W says:

    Bankruptcy is a legal proceeding in which people who cannot pay their debts can get a “fresh” financial start. Federal ‘l’aw provides the right to file for bankruptcy, all such cases are handled in a federal court. Filing for bankruptcy immediately stops all of your creditors from seeking debts from you, or until your debts are sorted out according to the law. There are may effects to filing for bankruptcy; eliminating legal obligation to pay your debts, stops potential foreclosure, prevent repossession of car, restore or prevent termination of utility service. There are several different types of bankruptcy; chapter 7 (straight bankruptcy), chapter 11 (reorganization(, Chapter 12 (reserved for family farmers), and chapter 13 (adjustment of debts). Chapter 7 is the most common bankruptcy filing.

  9. Dee T says:

    If I deleted a word, it’s not there. If I changed or added something, it’s in [brackets]. Good Luck!

    Bankruptcy is a legal proceeding in which people who cannot pay their bills get a fresh financial start. Federal Law provides [most people] the right to file for bankruptcy and all bankruptcy cases are handled in federal court. Filing bankruptcy immediately stops all of your creditors from seeking to collect debts from you, until your debts are sorted out according to the law. There are many effects on you once you file bankruptcy, such as eliminating the legal obligations to pay your debts, stop[ping] foreclosure on [a home], prevent[ing] repossession of a car, and restor[ing] or prevent[ing] termination of utility services. There are different types of bankruptcy that one can file; Chapter 7 (Straight Bankruptcy), Chapter 11 (reorganization), Chapter 12 (reserved for family farmers) and Chapter 13 (Adjustment of Debts). The most common bankruptcy cas[es are] filed under chapter 7.

  10. emilytheblack says:

    it’s good

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